Selasa, 07 Maret 2017

Written Report (Meeting 3)




What does the story tell you?
Do you like/dislike the story? Why?
First Story
Title:
Untouchable
The story is about a girl, Sia Lee, who is just a normal girl or maybe a normal human who met someone by an accident. She met a boy, named Jiho Shin. When they stuck each other, all of the book that she has bought are falling down and their hand are touched. Sia feel something strange from him. After that, Sia always following Jiho wherever he goes. Jiho thinks that Sia is a stalker, but actually Sia just want to know something from Jiho. Then, there is a second accident about ‘books’ that Sia deliberate keep it by herself so she can continues to be in close Jiho to find out who Jiho actually is.
I actually does not really like the story because the story which is use a vampire love life story with human is too mainstream. Besides, the story is easy too read what will happen next.
Second Story
Title:
My Pre-Wedding
The story is about Adimas who fall in love with Adelia. They are a civil cervant in the same school. The story is began with Adimas who scared of cockroach and he saved by Adelia who is become a brave girl in his eyes. Since then, Adimas fell in love with Adelia and kept chasing Adelia to get her love. So many problems he faced in order it is just for adelia.
In terms of the story is pretty good, but I do not really like to this comic, remembering that this comic takes place in the scope of Indonesian schools which incidentally looks less sensible for fellow civil servants do a physical contact in love context in a school environment.



From the stories, choose one of the unfinished story and make your own ending

I choose Untouchable, and the ending will be :

After the second incident about book, Jiho realizes that Sia is just playing around with him without wanting to give the book back. Sia become hated by Jiho because of that. Sia trying to apologizes to Jiho but he is not a typical person who will forgive someone easily. On the other hand, when Sia feel frustrated because Jiho does not want to forgive her, Baryu come closer to her. At first, Sia does not really happy when Baryu suddenly become close to her. But slowly, because Baryu always by her side whenever she faced any problems in her life, Sia started accept Baryu. Sia can feel that Baryu is honest and does not have any devil purpose. Since then they always together as a friend because Sia know that Baryu is a vampire same as Jiho and Sia make her own promise that she would not or even don't fall in love with a vampire after her feeling for Jiho was rejected indirectly. And the other side, Jiho can't do anything looking Sia, someone he loves, life happily with the other man which incidentally is his friend a fellow vampire, Baryu.

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